Book Review: Through the Mist by Lindsay Jayne Ashford

My season of spooky reading continues with another ghost story called Through the Mist by Lindsay Jayne Ashford. I’ve had this book on my shelf for awhile, but because I prefer reading ghost stories in the Fall, I was saving it until I could curl up with it in the colder months. This is the first I’ve read by this author so I didn’t approach it with high expectations, but I think this novel suffers from a case of misleading marketing more than anything. It’s a work of dark suspense, but not a ghost story, so beware of that if you choose to pick it up.
Plot Summary
Taking place after WWII, the novel opens with a short newspaper article announcing a suspicious death along the coast of Cornwall, along with a personal note between friends that implies some secretive activities. From there, we meet Ellen and Tony, a newlywed couple travelling the isolated road to their new home, a rustic cabin known as “Carreg Cottage” situated above the small town of St Ives. Tony is evasive about his history with the area and its assortment of odd inhabitants, but Ellen is so intent on making this new relationship work she’s ignoring the obvious red flags, including a creepy voodoo-like doll that she finds stuffed up the fireplace. In alternating chapters we are introduced to a young woman named Iris who is also returning to St Ives after a long absence, but because she’s run away from home she keeps her true identity a secret. She meets Ellen at a party, and ends up working for her in an attempt to make some money and provide for herself. Together, these women find themselves searching for more information; we discover fairly early on that it was Iris’s mother that was the subject of this newspaper article from a few years ago, while Ellen becomes increasingly sure that Carreg Cottage is actually haunted. The occasional chapter is written from Tony’s perspective, revealing that he’s not only keeping things from Ellen, but he’s also taking magic mushrooms regularly in an effort to quiet the voices that haunt Carreg. The creepy atmosphere is ramped up by the moors themselves, unknowable and covered in mist, but is the area truly haunted, or are the characters simply haunted by their own memories and experiences?
My Thoughts
So we have suggestions of ghosts, witches, drug addiction, mental illness, and infidelity all swirling through this plotline, which admittedly, gets a bit complicated. And because there are so many competing elements, it moves along slowly, inching towards the truth of what happened to Iris’s mother that fateful night, and how Tony is (or isn’t involved). On top of that we have a blossoming love story – the local Vicar’s son has fallen for Iris, but because she’s afraid to reveal her true identity, she is forced to keep secrets just like Ellen and Tony. All of these plot elements come together to create a storyline that’s engaging, but busy. Many ghost stories tend to ramp up quite quickly around the halfway point once it’s decided that ghost really do exist, but this book leaves that question hanging until almost the very end, which left me feeling impatient. I just wanted to get to the scary stuff, but instead I found myself navigating complicated family histories and bashful lovers with communication troubles. It definitely wasn’t what I was expecting – look at that cover!
Despite my grumblings about the misleading genre, it’s obvious this book is well researched and firmly placed within its unique setting. We are subtly reminded of the time period, an example is when Ellen attempts to lease a storefront and her husband (who is not making any income of his own, by the way) is required to sign on her behalf – she is not allowed to as a female. This is only years after she drove an ambulance and tended to wounded civilians in London during the war, which doesn’t seem to qualify her for much of anything post-war, other than ensuring her husband has a home cooked meal each night. And yet St Ives seems to be on the forefront of change as well – it’s full of artists of all different mediums, who each seem to support each other’s work with plenty of opportunities to display it as well. The author goes into great detail at the end of the book as to the real-life inspiration behind the fictional story, which is also very cool to read about.
I feel as though I’m being a bit unfair with this book because as it stands on its own it’s well-written and engaging, but I also don’t like to be faced with one kind of story when I was expecting another. Now that you’ve been warned, you can make an educated decision as to whether this novel is for you.






On the whole I find ghost stories work best in the format of short stories rather than novels. Novels usually need to fill the space with lots of other stuff, as you found her, whereas in short stories, the author can stick to the ‘haunting’.
That’s a very good point, and I’ve never really though of it that way, but it’s so true. I think that’s why I like my little ‘ghost stories’ that come out every Xmas here in Canada, those little chap books that I review every year. Which I plan to do again this year too, so stay tuned
The cover would have also led me to believe that it’s more “ghost-y” than it turned out to be. I do like a post-WWII time period, though. I probably won’t seek it out as “busy” isn’t an attractive descriptor.
Yes busy can certainly turn people off – but not always! Depends what you’re in the mood for :)
In spite of your reservations, Anne, I would like to read this one. Well-researched historical sounds good to me.
I’m glad to hear that – I try to be as fair as possible when reviewing! haha
Based on what you’ve said, I would have loved the nonfiction book about the people who inspired this instead of a fiction book. I have noticed in recent years that the haunted house novel is pretty much always a metaphor for trauma in a family, especially between parents and their children. I just don’t pick them up anymore. I don’t need to read that same metaphor repeatedly. I hope you’re doing well Anne. Of course, I’ve got my fingers crossed that you’re going to do your little bookish videos and show us the Advent calendar of chocolate and short stories. Heck, even if you don’t do the Advent short story calendar, I would love some videos from you in front of your Christmas tree! I must find the duck!!
Lastly, do you know of a way that I can get notifications for when you reply to comments that I leave on your blog? I don’t get notified at all. Actually, I just realized I won’t even get notified of your response to this question, lol.
Yes I know what you mean re: haunted houses. Surprisingly though, this book was not about family trauma – such a nice change! The hauntings were more to do with some witchcraftery sort of stuff.
Re: the advent calendar, I can’t promise I will do a video review (i find this too time consuming now, because I write my reviews over a few days, which is much easier) but I promise to take a picture of my fancy chocolate advent calendar, and of course include a few pics of the ducky-just for you!
Re: your question about notifications, sadly I don’t believe there is any way to get a ping with my responses, unless there is an opportunity to change the setting in the way you sign in to respond to my comments in the first place?
Yeah, I didn’t see any way to get a notification. I came back tonight to check if you had replied. I look forward to any Christmassy photos ☺️
It sounds like one I might enjoy based on what you’ve said you didn’t like about it, but I do agree about the cover, because I would have guessed that it wasn’t really to my usual taste! Marketing is tricky, eh?
especially with books!